Acute pain

Many people are not familiar with how much pain we have endured over the course of life.

They suggest I am brave.

No, I am not very brave.

I tried all the ways but it did not work out.

I don’t think you are going to add much to what I have already tried.

I don’t think, there is a lot of evidence to back up my opinion.

After what I have been through.

I just know how to handle it.

It’s my pain.

I am not brave either, but I fought it.

It’s my pain.

Note/ I don’t know about poetry, but it was written by randomness, this is the first time, i wrote a poem. Any suggestions are all welcome.

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19 thoughts on “Acute pain

  1. Hussein, that’s a good poem!

    It’s the flow of your thoughts of what you felt at the time of writing those words. It is what you want the world to read and relate to.

    In my opinion, there is no right or wrong way to write a poem. You simply write about whatever you have on your mind.

    Although I mostly write haiku, which are quite short per se, I can say that all your posts are good and most of them can be already read like a poem (if you divide your post into separate lines) 🙂

    Keep up the good work, Hussein!

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    1. Thank you so much for the instruction which you have provided it here, meaningfully the browse which you provided, is a good source to elicit some haiku notes and apply it in my blog, i always get out of something familiar and bring something new here, either i could gain some benefits to my personal needs, or my readers though so that they can get something and reach their needs. But your lovely information helped to gain my balance in writing. Thank you so much for the support dear llya, stay blessed, and wish you the best🙂😉

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      1. thank you for such kind words, Hussein!
        I am glad to be of help to you. Essentially because it is thanks to your writings that I started writing haiku ; – ) I never forget that.
        always love your style and your train of thought.
        keep going man!
        wish you the best too, Hussein

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      2. It is my pleasure. llya! Effortfully you do it great at your end and stunning words come by such a creative man who compose stuff like these professionally and creatively👍

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    1. Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Novus Lectio!🙂 the thing behind this poem is just about that people for whom we meet daily in real life. They complain a lot for they what they don’t have, and got envious from other people for what they do have indeed. Other people just like they turn things that they don’t have to pain, if we just think a little bit about the bliss of what we have such a good health free of diseases will be grateful the whole, if we really need just to pause and breath, and think about the breath we take, it is also a bliss, we can walk by using our feet, and others can not, it is also a bliss. Pain is bliss either we can grow. However, we need not all the time to complain, thankfully we should be grateful.

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    1. Thank you soiba for the nice compliment, means a lot, yeah it is the first time i go through poetry field. It seems great to include poetry into my blog. Thank you dear Soiba, stay blessed. I appreciate your visit a lot👍🙂

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    1. I don’t think that i am a good project for poetry world and literature in the future😁. Hhhh thank you so much for you encouraging words, you so kind 😊. Sending wave of blessings, Ortensia! 🌹❤️

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